Again, love it. Especially the whole dialogue between Walsh and the military officials. Very well-crafted, and nice flow. (To the whole thing, not just that part). My interest was peaked with the first installment, and now I'm getting hungry for more.
Later
Pat
"Parise, Charles" wrote:
--TITLE: To Cross the River Styx (2/?)
AUTHOR: Chazzman
E-MAIL: charles.parise@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
DISCLAIMER: I do not own any of the characters in this story. They all belong to Joss and the WB network. Please don't sue.SPOILERS: Open season on Season 4.
SUMMERY: I'm re-inventing season 4, 'Pangs' has just concluded.
RATED: PG
DISTRIBUTION: Just ask me, please...
FEEDBACK: Is very welcome.
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Thank you again to all the wonderful people who have sent me feedback saying they are interested in seeing more. I am trying to do these chapters fast, but I don't have a beta reader right now so please forgive the errors. In fact if you see some and let me know, I would appriciate it.
To Cross the River Styx
Chap 2
"You think you know? What's to come? What you are? You haven't even
begun."
(Tara to Buffy, BTVS)
"Since when is there a cowboy in 'Death of a Salesman' anyway?" (Willow,
BTVS)