Re: [buffyloveswillow] The Third Power (4/4)

["Quindo Ma" <quindo.ma@xxxxxxxxx>]

You have done great work here. I'm amazed as how you managed to show this here and I'm feeling more
and more happy with every story from you. I've read this part twice. Just to know what you do the
first time, and the second time to visualize all the scenes clearly and boy can I say that I had
great visuals ;-) This shows that you have an amazing talent at writing this good, so don't stop.
The only thing that bothered me a little were some word repeations here and there. But that was all
:-D

I'm desperately waiting for you to continue this storyline, but since you're going back to Somewhere
I think I can wait a little longer ;-)

Quin


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Wants now even more that Jim continues his B/W/T series for as long as possible.
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