Re: [buffyloveswillow] FF: Conversations 10

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Okay,
First, good story and the protective dome was a nice touch. As was the
semi-confessing to an unconscious Willow was also very in character. All
in all a very good job done here.
Now for the real comment, Aaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh!!!!!!!!!!!
Wild goose chases, dark tunnels, CAVE INS, you're killin' me. How can
you just leave me hangin' like that? Alright I can see that it's time to
get tough here. Get to that keyboard and rescue those girls and get
while you're at it giving Buffy some courage would be nice. Anyway get
to it, remember, chains, whips, torches, brunettes... oops sorry that
was the play room inventory. Anyway you get the idea, need more, write
more pleeeeeeease.
Take care.

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot,
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash,
part time trouble making badger,
and holy spook)
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Don't sweat the petty things --- Pet the sweaty things.
~A~
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There is no gravity...the Earth sucks!
~Newton's little brother~
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.