Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Here we go, Shy - your last two chapters of "SS" has been awesome! I said it before, but you really hit the mark with the mood for those chapters, first with the song's in "Five by Five" and then the monologue in "Tell Me I Was Dreaming" setup everything perfectly. Cilia - I figured you'd kill Joyce, since her character was a bit superfluous and you said you were trimming char's down in the story. I didnt really think Will was dead, but it seems she's shattered her mind in killing the warlock (apparently!) This story has been great so far, a major "two thumbs up" for you! Pat - you really didn't think you'd get away did you?? So you've put a chip in poor Buffy and had her treated like a combination lab rat/experiment in the wild. Can't wait to see what happens next. Can Buffy be helped or will she be helpless forever? I guess we'll just have to stay tuned to see! Kevin - I've loved "Militat" ever since I first read it and it's just kept on getting better. I loved the choice of names for their children as well; Kendra and Faith. I don't remember if you ever mentioned anything about her, but I can't think of a better pair of names! Great going so far. Vice-President of Monetary Embezzlement and Lawyerial Affairs Proud Papa Gopher Resident Gopher of the Sunnydale Forest Woods Outback "Oh, look," I said looking at the ground before tilting my head up to regard him. "There's a spider. Shouldn't you be running away screaming like a little girl?" - Buffy talking about Wesley - "Walking After Midnight" Content-Type: application/ms-tnef; name="winmail.dat" Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="winmail.dat" Attachment Converted: "D:\Dokumente und Einstellungen\BuffyS\Anwendungsdaten\Qualcomm\Eudora\Attach\Short Author Feedback"
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