RE: [buffyloveswillow] FIC: Circuit

["Brndn" <brndn@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

greetings and welcome
i liked it. interesting twist to our girl. i guess were seeing another side
of her few choose to acknowledge. to be honest, i dont think i would handle
my soulmate dying very well either

=>I'd like some "constructive" feedback. I have a healthy ego. I can take
it.

nothing was really wrong here, but if you want to get technical i got a wee
bit confused here (even though its not really hard to do...)
=>The Slayer is always serious, far above naming her favorite stake "Mr.
Pointy", far above befriending her "Slayerettes", and will most likely be
dead before her eighteenth birthday. Xander's money is on before Christmas.

She takes Fridays for herself, even in the midst of emergencies when one
more pair of eyes could make all the difference.

at first, i thought the 'she' there was the new slayer, but it was our
willow bingeing

like i said, nothing big, but, honesty coming your way!

Thank you for the stories
Thank the Cree-A-Tor'z
Brndn
Church Knight
Prelate of the Beta/Protector Guild