Re: -Two Worlds II- (Chapter Six: Gathering Forces)

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cilia,
As usual another excellent piece of work, and to be honest the only
suggestion I can make to improve it is more.

I'm glad to see you avoided the trap of having Buffy and Willow come
together as soon as she returned, it's good to see you're going to make
them work through some their issues before a reconciliation.

Take care and I hope to see more before too long. Thanks for allowing us
back on the ride, it's been great so far.

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot,
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash,
part time trouble making were-badger,
Semi-retired Scooter Tramp,
and holy spook)
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Don't sweat the petty things --- Pet the sweaty things. ~A~
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Y'all keep me occupied...I am having a real good time.
~Belle Starr~ ("The Long Riders")
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.