Re: FIC: Scoobies 2008 (1/?)

[" Cilia" <cilia@xxxxx>]

Hi!
This is Cilia grinning like an idiot and his is Cilia padding Pat's
back. Yes I am giving feedback, so put down that shocked expression
and read it.

Interesting story you've got going here Pat, really like the no
relationships focus you seem to be taking with the story at the
start, although I sense something with both Buffy and Faith and then
Angel and Kate, but that's okay. Plus you can't just hint Giles and
Joyce and leave it at that.

Now to tell you the truth I am getting a little bored with the
constant B/W goodness in B/W fics none the less, well not always the
goodness, but the overriding focus it tents to take, since the story
can be forgotten in the process of the romantic-carrot.

As always your work is top of the line when it comes to writing BtVS
fanfic. The scene with Cordy joking about Angel's human problems was
great and what's with Tara? I really can't find no fault with the
story and the present time, but I could and will if you don't keep
this level of quality up.

Also, if it can be avoided, I don't really want another same-sex
relationship in this story. Okay before you start protesting hear me
out: Willow with Tara is a fact and all and Faith is well Faith, but
I've developed a dislike for stories tend to become my gay-heaven
kind of stories, where at the end of it we have every other female
character paired with another female character in one way or another,
or every male character paired with another male character although
the later is not as common in my experience.

So keep it up, don't go overboard with the realtionship factor and I
look forward for more,
ta, ta,
Cilia



--- In buffyloveswillow@xxxxxxxxxxx, "Pat Kelly" <bandits@e...> wrote:
> Title: Scoobies 2008 (1/?)
> Rating: PG-13
> Author: Pat Kelly
> Summary: Future fic, that's not pairing focused. Yet. Though Willow
and Tara; Xander and Anya are still together.
> Spoilers: Not really. General Buffy and Angel, I guess. Vaguely
mentions bits about the seasons.
> Disclaimer: All hail Joss and his army of Mutant Enemies. I don't
own BTVS. I make no money.
> SCOOBIES 2008