Kudos for a fine finish! Respectful of canon
without being slavish to it, and a good read all around. And thanks for
not repeating the "If you walk out that door..." rant from Becoming 2! Oh,
and did you do that photomanip at the end? Very nice!
Kirayoshi
"Once, years ago, I saved the life of a wise old
priest.
Grateful, he made a gift to me of these few precious words: If you find yourself on a cliffside, trapped, with a hungry tiger waiting above and a hungry tiger waiting below, and by chance you spy a single strawberry growing from the cliffside... pluck the strawberry... and bite into it... and taste it." --Frank Miller "Ronin"
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