Great start to this fic! I'm liking it so far, even
though I'm in the same boat as you and missed most all of season 7, so I only know what I've "heard" when it comes to the last several eps. There's a few minor technical errors here and there, but nothing too distracting for me. One thing I'm not sure of - did you write parts 1 and 2, or are they supposed to be from the show? If you wrote them, I need to go back and read them as I missed them somehow. I hope to see Willow be the one who fixes Buffy's wounds in the next part! ;) Kris The first two parts are available at www.buffyspinoff.gossimer.net. Enjoy. Kirayoshi "Friends are the DNA of society. They are the basic building blocks of life. If you have a couple of good ones, treasure them like gold. There's nothing better. Ever look at that MCI ad they have, "Friends and Family"? Who do they mention first? Your friends help you carry the big weight in life. That big burden we've all got called, 'What the Hell am I doing?'" --Jerry Seinfeld |