Acepilot - A very good start and first effort in my opinion. I thought you captured Giles well - definately enjoyed his conversation with Buffy. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this. Oh, and the correct spelling is 'auditorium'.
Conner - A very interesting start. I know nothing about Stargate, but it sounds like it could be a good mix of characters. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Alex
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