Re: Fic: The Buffy and Willow Song 5/?

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Catching up...slowwwwly...

Acepilot,

Nicely sketched, with Willow sorting through her feelings.  The
"lust-but-not-yet-love" was believably written, although I would have
liked to see her either a) acknowledge that she did love Buffy as a
friend, she just wasn't sure about *in* love, or b) question whether she
loved Oz, as well.  But she's clearly making steps, a bit at a time
(liked her practically sulking about having to go to Giles's), and
Buffy's quite glad of what she can get.

Yes, the last line is corn, but it's not contrived like chapter 2 was.
And, ya know what?  Corn works :)

Dan


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