RE: Fic: Email Series

["danspector@xxxxxxxxx" <danspector@xxxxxxxxx>]

Nicole, 

Glad to see a new ficcer here, and hope there's much more to come!  A 
couple of technical notes (I'm a moderator here) and then on to the 
review:

1)  You may wonder why this took a few days to post.  As an anti-spam 
member, posts from new members are moderated to this list, and I 
hadn't been checking in.  Good news, though, now that you've posted 
fic, you've been taken off of moderated status, so that'll never be an 
issue again.

2)  In your initial post, the quotation marks and apostrophes were 
substituted for with unusual characters.  (I edited the moderated post, 
and fixed it up.)  As I understand it, this is caused by not turning off 
"smart quotes" in Word (or whatever you wrote this in).  Please turn 
them off in the future, as Yahoo apparently has a problem with this.  
Thanks.

And now, the fic!

Nice premise, and it's good to see you remembered Willow's crush on 
Giles.  I'm wondering about Willow's spelling things out so much that 
Buffy may start figuring things out by process of elimination, but I 
suppose we'll find out what Will's thinking (is she trying to drop a hint, 
or is she regretting mentioning it?) in future chapters.  Keep going.

Dan

random&I guess it's kind of a nitpick:  "Ya'll"?  Since when does Buffy 
use Southern slang?  I guess she could be training some 
Alabama-born new Slayers or something&heck, it could even be funny.  
Did strike me as a little odd, though.

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