Re: FF Psych Ward Blues

[person@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

Gee, I guess we all know who Ira called now... or do we? I mean, it 
could just be a coincidence, I suppose... but anyhow: excellent 
segment in the series, well written and so on, but... please get the 
requisite unhappy, struggly parts over with quickly and let everyone 
be happy again. I get so depressed reading sad parts, I feel like I 
could just stop paying my phone/net bills. 'Twas really good, written 
quickly, necessary for a good series... I just hate reading about
good 
people placed in bad situations over which they have no control... 
maybe I'm just a control freak. But I digress! It was great, please 
continue - and tell me if what I just wrote was too incoherent, since 
I'm not exactly sure I said what I really meant to, the way I meant 
to.
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