Re: [buffywantswillow] FF Nka part eight

["Christeen Demons" <Shyfox30@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

> Alright. I had intended to send out one big mail, with all the feedback to 
> the stories that I had neglected the past two months, which will also 
> include your 'Keeper of the Stars' and NKA 7.

Catch up time, huh?:-)
> But then, I saw this part in my mailbox, and read it. And now after reading 
> it, I just can't keep myself from replying directly to this part, and that 
> for a very good reason.
>
> Please don't take this wrong, but there are times when you don't seem to be 
> able to grasp all the fine ways to write a story. In such cases, I have 
> found that some avoidable mistakes have been made. But EVERY WRITER has 
> those times, and they are NOT avoidable.

Not quite sure How to take that...seems like you just contradicted 
yourself.:-)
> But in this part, you have once again been touched by the muse.
> It was absolutely beautiful. You managed to capture everything in the way 
> that makes it a perfect read. The last time I can remember reading such a 
> wonderful piece from you, was part 6 of NKA, where you wrote the love 
> scene. And here again, you phrased the sentences, the paragraphs, the whole 
> story in fact, so beautiful, that I feel you should take your time, and a 
> short brake from your current stories, and write a few short stories around 
> such situations. :-)

Heh, you mean take a break from the Sapho's Spell series? I think I'd have 
a lynch mob on my hands.:-)
> It's hard for every writer to find the right words at times, and it's even 
> harder to find words better than the right ones, but you simply brought it 
> together here and, even though I had to look up some of the words in my 
> english/german dictionary (I still have to do that sometimes :-), I have to 
> say that you have truly surpassed yourself again with this.

Thank you very much.:-) You're right it's not easy to find the right words 
all the time.:) Not even sure I capture the right words all the time, we 
can just do the best we can at the time and hope the image that we see get's 
through.:-) I'm glad to see the image got through this time.:-)
> Keep up the great work, and honor us with a few other such marvelous 
> stories.

Will do.:-)

Shyfox.

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