Re: [buffywantswillow]THE LAST DEATH (5/?)

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Jessica,
I really like this story and need more real soon, I mean REAL soon. You
have a way of drawing your reader into the story with you, which is
great, if it wasn't so short.
Then again even if you put out ten times as much it still wouldn't be
enough.
Take care.

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot, and undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash)
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Don't sweat the petty things --- Pet the sweaty things.
~A~
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For every silver lining there's a dark cloud.
~unknown~
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.