Re: [buffywantswillow] FF: Stages 2/3

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H.F.
I just finished this part and while I think it was wonderfully written
and exciting I do have one small comment:
Aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrgggghhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!
How can you do this I mean...it just...there isn't any... my gods you
left with a knife over her heart ready to push awk!!!! <ominous heavy
breathing> and you simply must bring Cordy back <demanding resolve face
with major tantrum> ]:-)
There, now don't we all feel better for having gotten that out ...NO! I
don't, I want, no, I need ,no, I must have more, soon, sooner, now, no,
sooner than that. 
Well you get the idea I kinda liked it some. huh? 
Keep em comin' guy you do great (if frustrating) work.
Take care.

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot, and undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash)
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Don't sweat the petty things --- Pet the sweaty things.
~A~
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For every silver lining there's a dark cloud.
~unknown~
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
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