Re: [buffywantswillow] FF: I got the music in me or why I am afraid of flutes.

[Tracy Drake <wstepp@xxxxxxxxxx>]

Carol,

You need to work on your self-esteem. I really like your story. I
thought the premise was a bit strange, but it worked and you tied up the
loose ends in the plot. As for the grammar and sentence structure, as
long the dialog flows and there are no obvious mistakes, the rules are
not as strict.

Thank You for the story and please continue.
--
Tracy Drake
tannim@xxxxxxxxxx

"Seduce my mind, and you can have my body. Find my soul, and I'm yours
forever"

p.s. (I've started a ego massage pallor for all the bards in the Woods
Out Back. Past the house of the vampire teddy bear slayer, and in the
Hollow. Watch out for the flamers, they have been spotted in the next
valley over.)