Re: ff:Becoming Real Part 12

[JStrass <JStrass@xxxxxxxxx>]

*snip, another awesome installment*

I have to say, but I think that this story is actually getting better, if 
that's possible. The manner in which you're working the emotion into the 
characters is making them more three dimensional. A good rhythm has been 
established here and I eagerly await more.

And the way you left us hanging here...

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"Yeah she belongs to Buffy." Kate said out loud and then added to herself
but for how much longer.

I can just see Duncan writing her memoirs later and the title of this 
chapter being: "I was a teenage Renfield"

L8R,

John


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That the reason people are more violently opposed to fur
than leather is because it's safer to harass rich women
than motorcycle gangs...