Hey Shy,
Great part as always, you've really shown Willow's dilemma along with
the way the whole situation is effecting the others.
Now you've brought in Willow's folks and along with where's Faith to
worry about we all get to wonder if her parents are really wanting to
help or are they just hatching another of their nasty little scams to
take the baby again.
No one changes that much that fast, on the other hand, they seemed
ruthless and unfeeling enough to take advantage of the situation if they
thought they could.
See now I'll be going nuts until you send out the next part and you know
that me any crazier than I already am is not a good thing.
Take care.
Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot,
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash,
part time trouble making were-badger,
Semi-retired Scooter Tramp,
and holy spook)
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Don't sweat the petty things --- Pet the sweaty things.
~A~
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Y'all keep me occupied...I am having a real good time.
~Belle Starr~ ("The Long Riders")
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.