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So many fics, so little time to respond. So I'll make the time!

Shyfox; still keeping us on the edge of our seats with "Stranger In My House". The latest chapter seems to be taking a dark turn. Only one quibble; as far as I'm aware, the legal drinking age in California is 21. And Buffy wasn't even carded. Just a thought. And it looks like we're gonna find out what happened to Faith...

Cilia; YES! Elisabeth and Willow are together again in Two Worlds! Now, if they can survive the final battle and get back to Earth and their lives again. Can't wait to see more, as well as more of BTVS 2117 and MI; Code Willow.

Tony McD; Another stellar chapter in "Trinity's Child". Cool use of VR, I can see it as a training tool. And why do I think that the Watchers' Council just made the biggest mistake in its history? No doubt also the last mistake in its history, especially if Buffy, Willow and Xander have something to say about it. Plus, you're fleshing out Jenny and Paul very well. Waiting patiently for the next chapter.

Anne Lise; NO! You turned Joyce into a vampire! AGH!(on the other hand, this does eliminate Buffy's dilemma of trying to tell her mom that she's gay!). Loving your Convergent Slayers story. Can't wait to see Willow the Slayer in action, and still holding onto a thin thread of hope that Joyce can be saved(although I strongly suspect not). Oh, and also enjoying "Groundhog Slayer", but JEEZ, lighten up on Xander, huh? I like the Zeppo, a helluva lot more than a certain cardboard cuttout which shall remain nameless(and hopefully off the show!).

Angel Ruiz; "Dark Future" looks promising. I can't wait to see you explain just far Buffy has fallen, and whether Willow can truly save her. Here's hoping. And have you written any other fics? I'd like to read them if you have.

Angelina; You can't have enough fanfiction with humor, especially with BtVS, where the mix of horror and humor is the series' hallmark. "My Slayer Lady" has the humor down pat; Buffy, Willow and Cordy giving manners lessons to Faith? Talk about your lost causes! LMAO! Please don't leave us hanging!

Red Demon; Hey, hey, hey! Welcome back to the list! "Flying Without Wings" still carries a nice angsty punch, with a touch of hope. The bond you've established between Buffy and Willow shows lots of potential, and may be the only thing that can save Buffy from her despair. Here's waiting for more.

Mr. Pointy; What's this? Not one, but two new bards today? We must be living right! "Guilty Pleasures" promises to be just that. As new warriors enter the field, their loyalties unknown, how will Buffy and crew deal with them? Looking good so far, don't stop when you have the momentum!

Eridan; New bard #2! And another fine start with "Splitted"(but the title seems awkward. Maybe "Split" would be better? Just an opinion). Who is the stranger who has entered Willow's life, who is the hooded woman who saved Buffy, and how will their lives be affected by them? You've raised a lot of good questions with this one. Can't wait to see them answered.

Well, that's all for now. Later, dudes and dudettes.
Kirayoshi
"Dying is easy. Comedy is hard."




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