Conversaton Snippet/Opinion Gathering

[Shadow <Shadowlander1@xxxxxxx>]

Okay... I've had this little snippet running wild in my head for a week
now... just not sure what to do with it. So I thought I would ask you
guys what you think of it, aside I need to seek professional help, and
if you had any suggestions on it. Let me know what you think, please.
:)


The naked redhead set quietly at the booted feet of her owner trying to
drew as little attention to herself as possible, although it was a
useless pursuit, her mistress always knew where she was. "Pet," the one
word brought up the slave's head, as the redhead looked into her owners
cold eyes. "Did you enjoy your playtime today?" The question caused an
uncontrollable trimmer to course through her body as she remembered the
early afternoon events. Her mistress had grown bored, which is
something her owner did not deal with very well, so the slave called
Willow found herself relieving the Mistress' boredom, by being whipped
for hours and forced to please the Mistress' mate while her owner looked
on.

"Yes Mistress, I enjoyed myself," the redhead replied with a lowered
head, knowing to answer otherwise would only mean another beating, this
one far more brutal then the one earlier, at least that one held an hint
of pleasure for her.

Trying not to cringe as her owner burst out laughing, "Ah pet... never
change... I know that my mate got a bit rough with you today... and
despite yourself you enjoyed it." The Mistress purred reaching down and
curling her fingers in the collar around her slave's neck, with a tug
she brought her pet closer to her, taking the mortal in a bruising
kiss. "I want you... now! Go to your room.... be ready for me when I
arrive... and be wearing your chains!"

"Y-yes Mistress," the slave breathed, new trimmers shaking her body, it
appeared that her owner was bored again and wasn't going to wait for her
mate to relieve that boredom. As her owner released her collar, the
naked slave crawled out of the throne room mindful of the fact her
Mistress did not give her permission to stand and walk.

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Well, thoughts? Commments? Anyone? Hello? Did I break anyone? I'm
taking suggestons on the Mistress and her mate... I know who the play
toy is. ::insert evil grin:: Okay so I got bored again, shoot me.
::lol::

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Shadow -
Dir. of Pub. Safety of the SECLGA and Chief Dungeon Keeper.
Vampire Teddy Bear and Flying Fox {Fruit Bat} of the Woods Outback. The
Big Bad and Little Comma. Mistress of Mischief... Corrupter of the
Innocent. Torment of Quindolyn. Founding Member of the Get Willow and
Buffy Naked Society. GWBNS - a way of life. Dark Mistress of Weird...
be afraid, be very afraid.