Feedback; Gotta give it to get it!

["Jim Means" <Jim_D_Means@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Well, I've been derelict in my duties as a feedback writer. Okay, what's new;

Anne-Lise; Hmm, the girls in Ireland? Me Irish heart leaps up with joy atthe prospect. Hope to see how this one plays out. And if you're worried about your skill as a writer, don't be. You're doing fine so far. And besides, the only way to improve is to keep writing. You're on a roll, don't stop now.

Cilia; Yeehah! Two Worlds is back! And Buffy and Willow are finally facing the mistakes of their past and the prospects of their future. Looks like you have the makings of a slambang finish to this wonderful series. And I'm gonna be along for the ride.

Shyfox; Greetings, fellow co-conspirator. Nice to see things shaping up for our favorite pair in Stranger In My House. They're just so close, if they'd only look a little further at each other. Lovely work, you capture their relationship perfectly.

Angelina; My Slayer Lady ended with a laugh. Fun stuff, though I can imagine how a certain ferret-faced school principal is going to handle the aftermath. Hey, could you just Turn Snyder and let our girls have a shot at her?

Soren; Fimbul? Okay, I'm intrigued. Especially if you follow through as you have done and show our girls together in various combinations. Strong start, let's see more. And I loved the fragment.

Angel; Nice to see your story shaping up, was afraid for our girls for a sec. For the record, I'm routing for Joyce to see the light, especially if she has that tumor in your universe as well. If this follows suit with theshow, she won't have much time to mend fences with her daughter.

Tony McD; The Tom Clancy of the Buffy/Willow shipper movement strikes again! Your ratcheting tension in Trinity's Child is great. Now it's time forTrinity to strike back. Can't wait to see the Watchers Council hauled before the World Court for their crimes. Are they just control freaks or are they hiding something more sinister?

Sam I Am; not associated with BtVS, but I loved the funny stuff you sent us. The Dr. Seuss computer piece had me on the floor. Had me rolling on thefloor, had me rolling out the door, had me laughing in my seat, had me laughing on my feet-- oh sorry, got carried away.

Spik; It's Grim Up North. Another strong start from a new writer. Can't wait to see what trouble our girls get into in England. Maybe they'll confront the Watchers Council. That's always fun.

Shadow; more sneak peeks, more snippets, can't wait to see you flesh out one or more of your ideas. Looks like fun.

Well, that's all I can think of for now. Later, taters.

Kirayoshi

"God does not play dice with the universe; He plays an ineffible game of His own devising, which might be compared, from the perspective of all the other players(ie., everybody), to being involved in an obscure and complex version of poker in a pitch-dark room, with blank cards, for infinite stakes,with a Dealer who won't tell you the rules and who smiles all the time."
--Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett
"Good Omens"