Re: FIC: The Dark Way (1/1)

[PChazzman@xxxxxxx]

In a message dated 3/24/01 3:32:54 PM Pacific Standard Time, 
Shadowlander1@xxxxxxx writes:


> 
> Okay - so what do you think? Salvageable? Needs rework? Too dark? Too
> confusing? And before you say it... I'm going to draft Carol into
> writing a few of the sex scenes to go into the middle of it. She's a
> hell of a lot better at that then I am... and maybe Sam too. He's got a
> talent for it too. :)
> 
> 

I think it shows excellent promise. I don't think it's to dark but perhaps 
some expansion is necessary.

Chazzman