Feedback:: Slayer Forever 3/?

[cilia@xxxxx]

Hi!

Feedback on Slayer Forever (3) by Steven Williams

-Story-
Short but still maintains a good standard, with the plot moving along 
nicely.

-Scenes-
Willow and Buffy holding hands and Willow hiding her head in Buffy's 
shoulder both left a nice visual image on my brain. 

-Characters-
Amanda came of a little off, giving too much information and a lot 
that didn't really make sense to share. Although Buffy is pretty much 
on par.

-Who next?-
Nick or Rithcie (spl?) should be up next, I mean they are relatively 
young and can help to girls a lot, although Nick is probably still 
finding himself after what happened at the end of the Raven series.

Sorry this was so short,
Cilia


--- In buffywantswillow@y..., "Steven Williams" <garrek42@y...> wrote:
> Slayer Forever
> By Steven Williams
> Disclaimer: I own nothing except for an exceptional amount of debt 
for a man my age.