Feedback//FF:Walking the Cat 12/?

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Carol,
An interesting and humorous chapter, very well written.

I believe Buffy and Tecal are having a little too much fun with good old
Shelia. 

Granted she is a whining manipulative bitch but it's not nice to give
the pregnant woman's mother a heart attack right after she arrives. 

It's better form to wait a couple of days after she has become
intolerable to kill the old bitty off.]:-)

Now that Willow's water has broken I wonder if dear old mom will be
treated to a few shifts during labor.<eg>

Looking forward to your next update, keep up he excellent work.
TTFN

Later
Alex