Feedback//FIC: Family Honour (6/?)

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Shadow,
I really liked the way this part started, then you just had to go with
the cliffhanger didn't cha.

Do you realize how fragile my sanity is? It isn't nice to tease the
semi-sane that way, nobody knows how little it would take to set them
off. The voices are already angry at you and you know why, don't you.

An excellent part even if it was too short. I really enjoy Shadow's
thoughts about Dru and Ms. Edith. I'm looking forward to seeing how she
handles it, and what the future holds for Oz.

Keep it up maybe you'll stumble on to the next part of (oh no dare I say
it, YES I dare!) "Stormchaser".<eg>

Sorry it was there and I just had to.]:-P
TTFN

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot, 
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash, 
part time trouble making were-badger,
Semi-retired Scooter Tramp,
holy spook,
The Middle Finger of The Hand of Chaos,
and the Yin to Shadow's Yang.)
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Laissez les bon temps roulez!!!!!
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.