Feedback//FIC: Flying Without Wings (5/?)

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Hey Red 
Nice scene but waaaaaaay too short. 
Your story has a lot of potential so just keep plugging at it. 

You'll soon get past your block as long as you don't fight it, let it
run it's course and it will go away.

Good work I hope you can get more out soon.
TTFN

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot, 
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash, 
part time trouble making were-badger,
Semi-retired Scooter Tramp,
holy spook,
The Middle Finger on The Hand of Chaos,
and the Yin to Shadow's Yang.)
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Laissez les bon temps roulez!!!!!
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.