to everyone about comments about Immortal Pair

[Hhdouglas@xxxxxxx]

i thank each and everyone of you who has posted comments on my 
story.this is the first story i have ever posted so i dont have a 
beta reader but it has been suggested by several people that i should 
get one.i probably will if i decide another story after this one.my 
story immortal pair is almost complete i believe at most it should 
only have two or three more parts.yes i know that is a short story 
but i am not a good enough writer to keep a story like this 
going.sooner or later i would run out of ideas on what to do and i 
would rather stop it while its still good than keep going and run it 
into the ground.yes my punctuation,run on sentences,and lack of 
paragraphs make it harder to read but please understand the computer 
i am using to write these chapters dont have any kind of wordchecker 
or any other kind of program that can move the story into 
paragraphs.i am just writing straight from the posting page and then 
posting it once i think i have done enough.i have been told that the 
first three chapters were too short and i am sorry but i had no 
choice but to do it like that.i have three different computers that i 
have access to and i had to post each chapter at a different computer 
because i kept getting ran off the computers i had been working on 
and posting from.