OT: An offer of Critisms

[Mad-Hamlet@xxxxxxx]

Greetings,
One thing I like about this group is people know what they enjoy and 
when they see it they go 'Balls to the Walls' in saying so.
Not just a simple 'Wow you're great' or 'More please?'
But a good long run down of what worked where and why. 
However..
I don't see a lot of ..or any for that matter.. critiques. This is not 
a bad thing mind you, maybe it's just done personally between the 
author and what beta-readers(I still call em 'pre-readers' myself).
Having finished Prisms and ..not...working as smoothly with Forge I'm 
wondering if anyone wants me to looks anything over and ..as I'm fond 
of saying..'Blow Truck Sized Holes in It'.
Just..y'know..so I got something to do. Just an offer.
Take care.
I remain, as always,
Mad-Hamlet