re: FF//Revelations and Realizations (4/?)

[Jim_D_Means@xxxxxxxxxxx]

Alex!

Another chapter in "Revelations and Realizations"! I must be doing somthing right. I am in awe at how you capture the love and passion between Buffy and Willow. The way Buffy believed that she didn't deserve Willow's love was especially heart-wrenching. After all that she's been through over the years, I can see how she managed to convince herself that any happiness she will ever experience is ephemeral, quick to vanish. Willow, as always, is the stability in her life, and you capture that perfectly. 

My only caveat is that you left us on a pretty heavy cliffhanger regarding Xander and Cordy in the last chapter, and you haven't returned to it yet. What happened to Cordy, and will she recover? I await more patiently.

Anyway, still a fine read, and hot enough to fry an egg on my monitor. Kudos, hats off, and in case I didn't make it clear, ya done good!
Kirayoshi

"I always say that a man should live forever or die trying."
--Spider Robinson, "The Calahan Chronicles"



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