Re: FF: Eternal Slayer (1/?)

[PChazzman@xxxxxxx]

In a message dated 5/26/01 12:01:58 PM Pacific Daylight Time, 
Jim_D_Means@xxxxxxxxxxx writes:


> Thomas!
> 
> A new bard comes before us. And from the beginning of your story, it looks 
> good.
> 
> One cavaet. The birthdate on Buffy's grave would be on February, not May. 
> Otherwise, everything that happened between "Blood Ties" and "The Gift" 
> would have taken only three days or so.
> 
> Other than that, looking good. I await more.
> Kirayoshi
> 
> 

Welcome Thomas, and nice start on the story.

Also Kirayoshi the birth date should probably be between Dec 21 and Jan 20 as 
she has said that she is a Capricorn. However they did not have the dates on 
her tomestone, only the years.

Chazzman