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Feedback to Montevallo

To: Buffy Wants Willow List <BuffyWantsWillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: Feedback to Montevallo
From: Phoen Dusk <Dusk@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Mon, 18 Jun 2001 22:10:11 -0400
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Um, and people think *I* write disturbing Fics. Suicidal Slayer in Thunderstorms? Pushing the envelope a bit here, aren't we? Then again, I did sort of make our favorite redhead kinda the same way once. Anyway, nicely written, good editing, mostly on-target characterizations (with the notable 'Huh?' in there).

As far as Moving On, you might want to let people (especially new lurkers to the list) know what the previous parts were. Can be kind of confusing otherwise. Other than that, how did a big brown demon know who Joyce was (or is that in a previous part)? Just me being picky.

Phoen Dusk

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