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Re: Feedback to Montevallo




I was just going with the story with Thunderstorms, there is a second part. (Less dark and coming up in a while.) 

 

About Moving on I used to write recaps,then I just forgot where I was in my story. Guess I'll ahve to start back again. Thank you for pointing out the fact about knowing Joyce. I forgot, I just assumed that the demon would have done background info on the slayer. Thank you for pointing it out.

-Angel


 



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--- Begin Message --- Um, and people think *I* write disturbing Fics.  Suicidal Slayer in Thunderstorms?  Pushing the envelope a bit here, aren't we?  Then again, I did sort of make our favorite redhead kinda the same way once.  Anyway, nicely written, good editing, mostly on-target characterizations (with the notable 'Huh?' in there).

As far as Moving On, you might want to let people (especially new lurkers to the list) know what the previous parts were.  Can be kind of confusing otherwise.  Other than that, how did a big brown demon know who Joyce was (or is that in a previous part)?  Just me being picky.

Phoen Dusk
 

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