Fic:Willow's Destiny:Prologue

["Alison" <willow3000uk@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Rating: Let's say pg-13 for now
Pairing: Buffy/Willow (My first B/W fic so bear with me!)
Summary: Basically how Willow and Buffy got together, how Willow and 
the other Scooby's dealt with Buff's death. Anymore would give it 
away!
Feedback: Well appreciated! Any ideas on how to make it better???
By Ali
: (Flashbacks):
Prologue: 
When I was in High School I always used to day-dream about meeting 
the perfect man, after a while Cordelia and her gangs taunting got to 
me and I realized that no-one would ever look at me and see a 
beautiful person. That all changed when Buffy came to town. She was 
my first female friend, someone I could talk to about things that I 
couldn't Xander. Then I met Oz and he loved me, until he cheated on 
me with Veruca. He came back after a few months but too many things 
had changed so that didn't work out. Then came Buffy. Sweet Buffy, I 
couldn't believe when she told me that she had more than friend's 
feelings for me. We decided to take it slowly considering this was 
the first time either of us had been in a relationship with the same 
gender before. 
Everyone always said that we belonged together, that we were soul 
mates, even Spike. 
Things were going so well, Buffy was feeling better for the first 
time since Joyce's death and we were both looking after Dawn. 
Then came what was to be our final night together, the night we made 
love for the first time. It was everything I'd ever dreamed about and 
more but soon our lives got in the way and we had to save the world. 
That was the night Buffy sacrificed herself, fulfilled her destiny 
and the night I was given mine.

What do you think??? Cryptic enough?!