Feedback//FF: Blind Faith act10 & Triad 9

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Sammy!!!
Great job on both of these, you can't imagine how happy I was to get
updates of both stories on the same day. The house may never be the
same, not to mention my roommates.]:-)

First of all talk about a contrast first there's the new contrite Faith
in "Blind Faith" wanting nothing more than to have Buffy and the
Scoobies accept her apology and if possible forgive her for her past
misdeeds. 

While in "Triad" we have the wild eyed sadistic Faith torturing Riley
(yeaaaaa!!) and the spare watcher with equal fervor and abandon. What a
girl and how wonderfully versatile.

The logistics of the honeymoon in Triad was to say the least interesting
and might I add gave some very hot visuals. 

Your take on Buffy's dilemma over how to explain her need to protect
Faith in "Blind Faith" is really very touching and the fact that at
least she is not lying to herself gives the reader a new perspective on
their relationship.

Good work Sammy, but of course as always we need more, lots more, very
VERY soon. K?
TTFN

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot, 
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash, 
part time trouble making were-badger,
Semi-retired Scooter Tramp,
The Middle Finger of The Hand of Chaos,
and the Yin to Shadow's Yang.)
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Laissez les bon temps roulez!!!!!
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.