Overdue Feedback

[Phoen Dusk <Dusk@xxxxxxxxx>]

I'm starting to wonder where all the time goes. It's been months since I've
made a contribution, and even longer since I handed out praise to some of my
fellow writers.

Shadow: Congrats on the new list. I read over 'Warrior... Slayer' and only have
one point of confusion. The end of Part 4 seems a little jumpy, with the
pounding on Willow's door to Faith and Willow popping into Ancient Greece. Just
me having a minor 'Huh?' episode. 'The Dark Way' made me sit up and retch...
well, bits of it, anyway. Pain and pleasure... reminds me of a few dates I've
been on.

Anne-Lise: When I read 'The Script,' I could almost hear Joss doing an
impression of Sam Jackson, though there were a few more 'motherfuckers' tossed
in his speech in my head. I stopped laughing after I fell out of my chair;
landing on a stack of books tends to do that (yes, I have not seen my floor in
years; novels and writing ideas hold dominance). You may have written a Fic for
Melinda, but I think all of us enjoyed it. Sad, but very touching. Kinda
reminds me of a B5 line that seems to apply to my life more often than not: 'All
love is unrequited.'

Carol: Recipes for Smut: nothing like an amusing PWP with a redheaded dominatrix
to get the blood flowing... though the sensation of it running down your back
and puddling at your feet is kind of disturbing at times. Ah well, the
drawbacks of lust, I suppose.

Fox: Buffy and Willow as the Dirty Pair? While it might have seemed like a good
idea, I have to say I was disappointed with the final result. I expected at
least three times as much destruction! ;)

Kirayoshi: Stop writing so much, you're making me look bad! I keep smiling
every time I read 'The Workout.' Chocolate body paint? Do you know how
difficult that is to get out of hair? Um, never mind, I didn't ask that. What
can be said about 'Somewhere I Have Never Travelled' (all of it to date,
including the 'Tryptich' companion) except... nah, I'm going back to my original
statement, you're making some of us look bad! Take a vacation, turn off the
computer, give us a chance to catch up! But make sure you send us a few more
great chapters first.

Heather: 'An Unexpected Turn' led to 'Better Days,' with my faith restored (no
pun intended) in people using a spellchecker in conjunction with their
narratives. Only minor thing (and it's something we all do) is that you might
want to check the punctuation a little more carefully. Hell, I'm STILL doing
editing on my fics, sometimes expressly for that purpose (no, the changes will
not be posted here, but they will be present on *gasp* the website I'm working
on).

Lowdeen: I was reading the 'Daze' series and reached the end of Sangre Daze Part
2. Then I wondered where the next part was. Not finding one, I wish to inform
you that the dogs have traced your scent and the Black Ops team should be
storming your abode as you read this. Good luck, they have orders to duct tape
you to your desk chair until the next part is done.

I know I missed some people, but hopefully this satisfies some folks for now.

Phoen Dusk
Tiger Beret of the Woods Outback Border Patrol
Devotee of the GWBFN (Apologies to Shadow, but you gotta have Faith!)
Herald of the Narratives of the Eventide