Re: FIC: Keep It Simple, Stupid

["Melinda" <msantoyo@xxxxxxxxx>]

Just wanted to get back to you on both this and straight thorugh.. I relly liked the way you wrote this differnt twist, Buffy's attempt to not let Faith shut her out, even if is a KISS method (keep it simple stupid) I hope you do another break and write more. Stright through the heart was good. It'sinteresting how even through you state the Buffy & faith were close Faith still backs Buffy and don't want to see Cordy. It was also cool how Buffy was angry at Cordy for making Willow feel guilty and be in pain. Please contiue this excellent fic!
Melinda
aka
Panda Mel
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Sent: Wednesday, July 18, 2001 11:42 PM
Subject: FIC: Keep It Simple, Stupid


Title: Keep It Simple, Stupid 
Rating: PG (really just for tension and the hope of a future f/f relationship) 
Pairing: B/F 
Summary: In this rewrite of the last scene from "Revelations", Buffy finds that less is more. 
Spoilers: Just "Revelations", as mentioned. 
Disclaimer: Weirdly, Joss Whedon forgot to give me ownership of BtVS for my birthday (cheap bastard!). So this stuff still all belongs to Joss, the Kuzuis, sundry production companies, studios, and networks. 
Archiving: Archiving sought. Archiving welcomed. Just tell me. 
Feedback: People gave me feedback for "Straight Through the Heart, Ch. 1"and I'm writing again, rather than going to bed.