Am in need of a beta-reader

[Tim Møller <sitisas2@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

I have a story (NC17), I need to have beta-read for spelling and grammar
errors.
It would be preferable if you have MSWord, but it isn?t essential.

Here is a little appetizer:

?The test goes as follow:

There will be two players: A Master and his apprentice. The Master?s taskis
to seduce his unwilling apprentice, making her beg him to end the sexual
torture by having sex with her or said in another way I?ll tease your body
until it demands you to beg for release, which I?ll grant. I believe that
you can figure out your part in this. It will be a contest of wills: the
body against the mind.
The Master is only allowed to use words, soft caresses and blowing at her,
however he must not touch her sex otherwise it would be unfair to the
apprentice. If the Master breaks the rules then the apprentice has won the
contest. But that has never happened and don?t worry Buffy it will not
happened this time either, I am simple to good.?

Before Buffy could tell him what she thought about the rules and his
arrogance Angel made a loud sniff.

?Ah, I can smell your approval of the rules. Good because they are about to
change.? Angel had smelled her arousal, when he had begun to talk about the
test.

(In case you are wondering, Willow does play a very important part in this
story... trust me.)




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