Re: TITLE: Aeternus Eternus Donum (1/?)

[Mad-Hamlet@xxxxxxx]

Greetings,
Whoa! Intense. 
Not very pleasent either. Er..I mean what with Tara taking the 
nosedive. I must really compliment you, 'specially with Willow talking 
to Tara before she died. That really slipped between the ribs nicely. 
Soft...not loud. A good soft touch, that burns.
Very nice.
Definetly something to sit up and take note of.
Though it's not hard to figure out where Buffy is. She's still feeling 
guilty. Ye Olde 'Could have moved faster, could have saved her, I 
failed Willow I failed Tara' thought loop.
Also I liked Doc's demise. The whole 
'This should be intrestigiiiaaaaiiieeee!' from the canon was a little 
flat. 
And I just accidently punned.
Damn.
The next part will be greeted with my continued intrest.
Again, very nice.
I remain, as always,
Mad-Hamlet