Re: FIC: the rock love story SPIKE (1/4)

[Nathan Campbell <NathanCampbell@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Jana. Looks like an interesting start to your fic.

Nathan Campbell
NathanCampbell@xxxxxxxxxxxx

When sun sprays the earth
with straight-falling flames,
a cricket rubs his wings,
scraping up thin sweet song.
-Sappho


=?iso-8859-1?q?Jana=20Salgueiro?= wrote:

> Hello you all, i'm new here, and to start i'm sending my first fic. I don't
know how well do I write, and sorry about some gramar mistakes, I'm from
Brazil. Thank you
> 
> TITLE: The Rock Love Story
> 
> SUMMARY: buffy and willow don't know how to tell each other theyr fellings
(the same old crap) it's also some kind of songfic, each chapter has a song of
the band My ruin, this chapter the song is horrible pain.
> 
> DISCLAIMER: all characters belong to Joss Wedon and mutant Enemy, and the
music letter belongs to the best band in the world My Ruin, just borrowed
everything for a moment
> 
> ARCHIVING: Take it if you want, maybe you are crazy, anyway let me know.
> 
> AUTHORS NOTE: letters of the music are in red, the music ins't complete i
took of some parts, thougths are in <>. Hope you like it!! good luck
> 
> 
> 
> INTRODUCTION...
> 
> Fellings of people, confusions in their mind, they don't know what they
want, they don't know what they'll get ,but today it seems that they will take
their chance, some of them maybe lucky, and some of them maybe not. and all of
this full of rock of the my ruin band
> 
> =================================================
> 
> CHAPTER ONE
> 
> 
> 
> SPIKE - Horrible Pain
> 
> <I invoque her.. and she comes to me in my dreams
> dressed in black, she speaks in a language only I can understand>
> 
> - I must be crazy of having these toughts, my dreams, confusions in my head
- Spike is in his "house" alone, smoking a cigar, and what it looks liking
thinkig about something that is disturb him.
> 
> <Her hands are warm, her breath is hot
> buffy is the horrible pain whitin my heart>
> 
> - Why can't I just stop thinking of her? A'm an evil vampire, i can't fall
in love with a slayer, i kill slayers. -
> 
> <Far from innocent, she is pure evil
> a sinners prayer... a saint desire
> for her I would walk trough fire, to draw her I want so bad... one gift
I´ll never have>
> 
> - She is so fucking impossible, and so fucking gorgeous - Spike says it
trowing out the rest of his cigar and taking a photo of Buffy.
> 
> <She drives a stake in my soul ,makes me bleed, make me whole
> she is brutal as the depths of hell, in my dreams I press my mouth against
hers>
> 
> - And sometimes more than my lips - 
> 
> <And i fell heaven...horror...terror
> she looks at me with that look, I call it her serial killer look>
> 
> - She could kill me with that look, but I would die happy -
> 
> < that look, is like she wants to fuck me and kill me all at the same time
> it scares me... it turns me on, her stare is intense... meaningful...
powerfull>
> 
> - And I thought she would never scare me, and never have power over me -
> 
> <maybe thats why she is so fucking scary.. because she means it
> it's almost creepy...uncomfortable... sexy
> I guess I know she could never chop off my hands>
> 
> - Or could she?? Should I try again?? Reveal my love to her?? -
> 
> Spikes take his coat leaving his "house", decided to look out for buffy,
and tell her, that she must be with him he must her fast before she realize
that she loves the red girl.
> 
> END OF CHAPTER ONE
> 
> ========================================
> 
> Hum,. what do you say?? ain't that good, well next to come.see ya
> 
> Evil Willow Jana
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