Re: ORIGINAL: Path of Tears (1/?)

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The first novel, much like the second, is in a state of not being 
complete, but the second one just sort of came around about the same 
time as the first one did.

If you're interested in reading both of them, I can mail 'em to you 
off list. Depending the amount of interest, I may post a bit more of 
Path of Tears to the list...*shrugs* I'll just have to say.

thanks for the feedback....

~alan, the mad dragon (aka Listmum Kimber's Pet Muse)

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., Nathan Campbell <NathanCampbell@P...> 
wrote:
> Cool stuff... There were a few places where the female character
> responded in specific ways to general statements, like, as in, I'm
> pretty sure when she said "Teach me?" the guy hadn't said anything
> about teaching, but just about helping, but that didn't really 
detract
> from the overall experience, and... that's what feedback is for,
> right? And it was a very intriguing scene; I would hope to see more 
of
> it. So, on that subject, what's the availability of the first novel?
> I'd be interested in reading it, too.
> 
> In hope I've helped,
> 
> Nathan Campbell
> NathanCampbell@p...
> 
> When sun sprays the earth
> with straight-falling flames,
> a cricket rubs his wings,
> scraping up thin sweet song.
> -Sappho
> 
> 
> Alan Rogers wrote: