Re: :Feedback a Go-Go

["Melinda" <msantoyo@xxxxxxxxx>]

Annelise!!
Snippet after snippet, they keep coming and coming, and cumming!!! Love em.
I truly like how you write the unusal & different well!! The She-ra one was
hilirirous and you know what?? I remeber most of the cartoon, scary hey?
you're Bad hair day was funny I liked how you got rid of Riley, again I
recognized many shows from my childhood, Superglue snippet was funny and
very ..uh..stimulating, hehe.esp. the edition with Joyce, hehe funny! and
Willow's dangerous look with the superglue!! Edition 3 was cool, I like how
you wrote everyone'a dialogue, was that a song, or your own work?? cause it
was just tooo good!!! The reply to 3rd edition was hilirious, with tricking
Willow ha that ws funny!! Edition 5 was good "I guess you missed me" was
awesome, poor tara:) hehe just trying to get your goat!! Reply to edition 5
was dark, Buffy vamp, hey?? hmmmmm Edition 6 was powerful, you yet again
manage to capture the love that exist between these two women lovely. Your's
& Fox's latest strip was awesome! "I don't want to give hime a hapyy" I was
laughing for a very long time!! I hpe you contine your little story of tall
tales it was funny!! as well as your parady of Grim Up North!! Keep it up
Anne, I looked forward to your snippets!!

Aeris Jade! Love your series of Restorations You are continueing to
beautiffully mix the 3 story lines, awesome! ahh Corday was a Watcher!!
fantastic!! Keep up the good work!!

Alan- Ascension's Shadow is going quite well, I loved how you made Joyce
notice the closeness of Buffy & Willow. Awesome, so Buffy is sharing her
secret, huh? can't wait for more!! Your Oringinal story so far sounds good!
I would love to read so more!!

Kevin! It was do nice to see writings from you again, I had really enjoyed
Militat Omnis Amans, so I know I'll love the sequal!! You're off to a great
start, demonstrating the powers of Buffy & Willow along with all the changes
they've gone through as well as explainations, all good can't wait for more!

Callisto - Good to see the next chapter, I'm a little worried though, Buffy
realizes what she has to do, but what about Willow?? Is she gonna accept
what Buffy says or push her away from her own guilt??!! you must write more
to answer questions!!:)

Carol! AMerican Pir snippet was awesome, I just saw the movie and couldn't
stop laughing I loved how Buffy called Xander to bail her out!!

Cheryl Hill! Your 2nd snippet was good, and I did understand that Willow say
Buffy's face and Buffy sees that:) I hope you continue to grace us with your
snippets...or..maybe.. you could ahh.. write a whole fic!!:)

Shyfox!! seven days 2nd part was awesome getting the episodes right on the
mark!! I can't wait to see more form this oh! wait but I want more of
Sappho's Spell, ahh but I ahh want more of NKA, grrrr. but I want more of
Past Imperfect!! Oh God!! just keep wriitng I'm sure you'll have me addicted
to whatever you write!!!

Cilia! Willow's Naughty Fairy is well naughty!! I loved it though as well as
the action figures! Where can I get one!!:) Foloowing Rose 2 was good, I
like Buffy's reaction to Willow's new look, Spike & June??? uh-oh!! The Dark
Elf, It's weird getting posts with separte storylines, but I like it. I like
the explaination of names in Poet's family.2nd Generation seems to flow
well, I like how Faith & Willow were able to tell a story without
interupting each other. Please continue all our works, phew!!

Macbeth! Loved your latest in Eternal Slayer, I hope Willow will See Buffy
soon!!!

Dan- Straigh Through the heart is going very well, I like how Willow broke
down due to Buffy's guilt, there's only one way for Buffy to make this up
don't you?? with smoochies of course!! :) Keep Up the good work.

Jana - I enjoyed your Rock Love sTory, the different views of each character
was good, please continue to write more!!

Yoshi!! Part 5 of return was excellent! I hope Riley does not succeed in his
new mission!! Keep writing

Alex! Revelations 11 was....intense. Merrik..dad, Giles his mentor! very
intense. very good. loved it!! more please!!

Kimber- Aeternus Eternus donum a new fic?? well I love you twist of the
season finale, can't wait for more, tara's gone?? oh well. I'm sure someone
could help willow through the pain!!

Hamlet - you're snippets are hilirious i'd say please continue but I want
another arch of a story, you know you're usual brand of fun!!

Marie-Claude - Well you're off to a great start with being new here! Hope to
see more of Dragonkind!!

Sammy!! you crazy Vampire koala!! Showdown in the Forest was hilirous!!
traing Buffy?? Bad bad, smut smut smut! more more more!! You already know
what I think of the naked parade!! ok, Blind Faith, coming along nicely
hopefully there will be faith and Buffy smoochies soon:) Mage 2 was good, so
cordelia got a vision of Buffy huh? that's not good!! can't wait for more!!
By the way I'll be driving around the wonderful hovercraft, Douglas
descriped in Immortal slayer, after all you said it was perfect for a
Special Ops Panda, and Shadow hasn't said I couldn't...Brrrrrwhhhhhaaaaaaa!!
<evil grin> Sammy when do you wanna go crusing for naked slayers???

Bill & Kerry loved your latest in three years. so buffy's letters neverd
made it back to Giles & co, and Giles is married to Joyce. I like how you
took some items to cannon, ie joyce's sickness. Can't wait til Buffy & Faith
meet up!!


Phew!!! I think I got everybody!!! Please continue to write!! I'm off to
drive my Hovercraft around!! bye!!


Melinda
aka
Panda Mel