Re: Anne-Lise's Snippets (Edition 6)

["Quindo Ma" <quindo.ma@xxxxxxxxx>]

| and I disagree with what Quin said about certain words disturbing the
| flow; it's NC-17 and there's nothing wrong with proper terminology

I never said that it was bad, just that the words cum, cunt, and such tend
to have a slightly protruding nature. They tend to stand out in a sentence,
and that's what I meant with breaking the flow. If you see, or hear, those
words, you notice them right away, it's why they're used in dirty talk, and
depending on the situation, they're exciting or hurting, but you always hear
them out of a sentence.
And in this case, they tended to shake one up, make them more aware of the
words around them, the sentence, the situation. Constant flow isn't always a
good thing, it has the thing to, mmm... bore you after a while. It gets
monoton, and with inserting catch-words, you again become aware of
everything, and don't take the storyflow as granted.
And in any case, I'm old enough to know the difference, and I enjoy them as
what they were :-)

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Quin