Re: Fic; On Occasion; In the Park

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Jim,

"Well, after a performance like that, I kind of had my
suspicions"--very nice.

This worked well with the "Lovers Walk" dustup actually working as a
cleansing device; when all the shouting's over, the pieces fit into
place. No sex like makeup sex.

And the epilogue, with the girls' guardian Angel, worked well, too.
After all, that's the role he was meant to play (I certainly don't
remember Whistler telling Angel about his duties and mentioning shagging
Buffy on the side. As the mayor said "Is that your greater purpose?").

The minorest nit to pick would be that science geek Willow definitely
ought to know where the solar plexus is, but I'm too happy to mention
it.

Moremoremore (oh, how I like it!),

Dan

(Mr. Mad, your turn, if you will)