Re: Fic: Fluffy White Carpet (Part 1/?)

[Kris <krismpy@xxxxxxxxx>]

--- weryvcb@xxxxxxxxx wrote:
> Hello people. I'm one of those weird
> posters who come every 
> couple of months offering tidbits. Anywhoo,
> Read and enjoy. I kind of 
> like the premise, so who knows, this may be the
> start of a really
> long 
> fic. 

Hey, I love it so far. And I like long fics, so
write away! 

I do have a minor question about this paragraph.

> 
> The phone rang, and her inner monologue
on bad
> parenting and 
> poorly made cereal stopped as she went towards
> the door. 
> Maybe it was her father and he had just
been
> joking about not 
> being able to come and they would go out for
> dinner and she could
> have a Caesar salad and she wouldn't be
> condemned to blue milk and
> she 
> would get ice cream and they would?
> She opened the door and looked out.
Nobody was
> there. She 
> looked down. 

What happened to the phone call? I mean, one
second it rings, and the next she's getting the
door. Did she ignore the phone in favor of the
door, or did I miss something? I realize it has
no real bearing on the piece--just curious.

Kris

Oh, and the gutter is no problem as long as Buffy
and Willow are there!

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