Re: Fic; Return (9/10)

["JDMeans" <Jim_D_Means@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

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Sent: Saturday, September 29, 2001 2:17 PM
Subject: Re: Fic; Return (9/10)


Jim,

Damn nice work. So the enjoining spell not only defeats Glory
externally, it reunites Buffy internally, huh? Good concept. And the
chat with Death was well done.

Two small corrections:

1) You forgot Buffy's major childhood encounter with Death-losing
cousin/best friend Celia to die Kinderstod when both girls were eight
(see "Killed By Death"), which scarred her so badly it still manifests
to this day in her aversion to hospitals.

::Slaps hand to forehead:: "Wow, I could have had a V8!"

Thanks for the info. The truth is, I only really discovered the wonder and magic that is "Buffy the Vampire Slayer" after Angelus. My first memoryof Joyce was her final blow-up with Buffy in Becoming 2(My opinion of her improved in season three). Fortunately, the older eps are now on FX, so I can catch them there. But I am in the process of editing chapter nine to include mention of Celia and Die Kinderstod, before submitting the story to any of the regular sites(Pink Rabbit, Stake and Chakram, etc.).

Later,
Kirayoshi

"Nowadays, anyone with a henna tattoo and a spice rack thinks they're a sister to the dark ones."
--Willow, "Hush"