Re: Hey Baby, That Night, I'm Scared, Superhero, What Happen..

["Melinda" <msantoyo@xxxxxxxxx>]

Angel!
sorry this is do late but I finally got my email sorted through, hehe so here's some feedback....

Superhero - Gotta tell you I really liked how you used the song to have Buffy express her feelings that way, then to throw the corker of Willow not interested, although I prefer them together, You did a good job of going back to the song to continue to illustrate Buffy's feelings. really good

Hey Baby - I liked your take on Doppleganger. hehe I'm a sucker for rewrites of past episodes to the shippy-goodness that is of Buffy and Willow. Now I have to think that there was more to the hug then just a hug cuz..Buffy &Willow hug all the time and the rest of the gang wouldn't get shocked by them hugging, unless that's just wishful thinking, hehe

That Night - Now either you've posted this previously here on the list or it's on a site somewhere cuz I've read this before but only got to the scenewhere Willow finds out that it's Tara. I gotta tell you I like how Buffy'sguilt works in this story mainly cuz it's the Buffy way to do it. Willow'sguilt-I like it cuz well, i just do so there!!:) anyway very good, although a bit confusing in the begining, but I think you're trying to do that to make us think it's originally Buffy, right?? hehe

I'm Scared {Spelled right:)} - Nice follow-up to Superhero and it kinda makes me feel better on how Willow left Buffy. I liked the line "is Buffy following me around with some damn cds?" Pretty cool. The write in of the weather also does a good reflection of Willow's storm of emotions. :)

What Happened After .. - Another good follow up, I enjoyed reading it and the newness of the couple's relationship. I like Willow's reaction to Joyce's staement about Buffy & Riley, very cute.:)

To summerize you need to write follow-ups to all of the listed above fics!!:) hehe I like you fics cuz you know it's kinda like watching a tv show cuts to different scenes. Hope to see more!
Melinda
aka
Sp. Ops. Panda Mel

----- Original Message ----- 
From: angel ruiz 
To: buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 
Sent: Monday, November 12, 2001 11:43 AM
Subject: FIC: What Happened After That Night