Re: Review: Spike Bad

[cilia@xxxxx]

Glad to be of service, yes my main concern was with Spike's 
character being a bit excesive and brutal and Willow's passive 
nature, I mean she's strong mentaly so she shold be plotting 
something. Also remember that graphic imagery can be a double edged 
sword.

Take care,
Cilia

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., Kris <krismpy@y...> wrote:
> Thanks for the feedback and C&C Cilia! I think I
> have some good ideas for improvement based on
> your observations, and I just want to make sure
> I'm understanding you correctly so I don't go off
> and change what isn't broken. Your biggest area
> of concern seems to be my characterization of
> Spike, and also how he was able to make Willow so
> passive, right? Ok, if I've got that right, then
> I think I have some ideas for improving upon all
> that. If I'm off, please let me know.
> 
> Thanks again,
> Kris