Re: FF: Giving In: Chapter One

["debvii" <debvii@xxxxxxxxx>]

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., aerisjade@w... wrote:
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> Pairing: Willow/Buffy 
> Time line: Right after wrecked

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hi, i'm kinda new here and i've been lurking, but i just had to post to 
say: "HALLELUJAH! A season6 B/W fic!" <g>

i know next to nothing about D&D, i'm generally wary of crossovers and 
stories that turn Willow into something non-human, and i think the 
magic=drug non-metaphor of "Wrecked" was profoundly wrong-headed, BUT i 
enjoyed what you've done here so far. i was somewhat confused about 
the whole Elf vs. Human magick thing, but I can be patient. (if i were 
to give any suggestion as to what you might do differently, it would be 
to slow down a little bit and develop character motivations a little 
further.) i'll be interested to see where you take this.
thank you for a season6 B/W fic! :)