Re: A Journey of a Thousand Miles (Stuck in a Moment)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Jim,

Oooh, nice! In the words of Cameron Crowe, "you had me at the
disclaimer?"

Particularly liked Buffy's half-truths and dodging around the reasons
for the uninvite spell (so Buffy), her reflection on how her changes and
the changed relationship with Spike intertwine, and the Willow/Dawn
scene.

Nothing to really criticize, except the use of "Wills" (especially now
that I know you're a US resident--Buffy never says that, it's a British
thing). And the ellipsises (the three-dot things) came out badly on my
copy, I don't know what sort of technical problem that is (smart
quotes?).

Looking forward to where you go from here,

Dan

PS--William Exeter? How appropriate and effetely preppy.

Oh, and I'd love it if you could work in some Giles-missage, but that's
no biggie.